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PostSubject: .:Drama (blues for bonnie sweeten):.   Sun May 31, 2009 12:46 pm



::my Bonnie caused uproar in Philly; my Bonnie tells lies can't you see... my Bonnie takes jet planes to Disney...oh bring back my Bonnie to meeeeeee::


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in this theatre of war; it’s gotta be hard fought..
it's an array of endless battles
battling losses to win over a win for ourselves..
for our families; but it’s still theatre
on stage, the rage; short of any righteous showmanship
too often the right men...women; not showing up
the ones that do
they arrive & depart without clues; so this war...these battles
they’re fought clueless; nonetheless we act out
fathers... mothers acting as trans - parents
sons... daughters
rapidly moving transients :::constantly
transitioning on a roll...calling it a goal

the ole darkie stories
they unfold
getting retold & taking a toll, this
with each half step taken
scandal; pseudo slander...they’re in collusion
seems like confusion
where we once had hopeful promises; now
how it astonishes..
dubious ends which justify the means..
the incredible non-credible scenes
out of touch; out of context
with its strange ways living outside of reality
spaced out with all it’s inconsistencies
inaccuracies; material deities; father - less - mother - less
hampered by ::convoluted memories
suffering their loss; wherein what’s spent is much; too much
too much of our time ::lifetimes
given over to troubled love-hate relationships

unforgiving is the overreaching;
we under-react..
to the overreacting again & again
to the acts of self conflicted con-artists
a consequence of curious interest
but none providing any solid family solace

::so where’s the reliance?

are we the callous nihilists; engaged
undertaking staring roles in
not-so clever theme park trips
swiftly running
sprinting through & out the closest door
why & what are we running for?
the question asked... by
long necked kids with short attention spans.
the answers they demand
yet are held tightly; gripped by our enemies
all those ill demons
staring back from mirrors
while wondering what the fear is.


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PostSubject: Re: .:Drama (blues for bonnie sweeten):.   Fri Sep 11, 2009 8:33 am

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UPDATE: You Lie!!




mesmerizing this bad fate;
plea bar
on the court date...9 months,
slam the gate

Slanderous accusation
Bonnie's Blues...incarceration
and daddy swinging
one newsman-to-the-next
So sad;
him feelin a need to flex
Upset w/ the world and how it spins
Soap opera life;
recording daughter's sins
The Thinking
her world
dizzy & shrinking
blame it
onna Brother
w/ out even blinking

Trunk of a car; she'd be a star
Flashing fake ID;
she wanted lies to go far

Soccer mom
w/ a tag-along-tike...they all look alike
Disney World bound
when
it should've been
The Psyche
w/ therapy built around

"One Can't Do As They Like"


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