me-cca

Number of posts: 66 Registration date: 2008-01-15
 | Subject: goddess Tue May 05, 2009 9:38 pm | |
| she waited years for me to arrive melted into the wet of my eyes we were in womb together...i still recognize she was a flower child...with a strong mind let her fear subside so we could combine sang to me in a conversation we had on her street I tried to hold it in but her cup leaked then overflowed into the grooves of my sentence she attempted to merely float by I grabbed her without repentence her strength died she weakens my afterthought she is my four thought, 22 rupies short after her feelings got caught born again on my birthday baked into cancerian cupcake, with sprinkles on top across timelines she makes my thoughts soft i hear her calling her course already planned completing mental commands this mindplay thing is our commune we sit for hours amused sit in silence and understand blessed thoughts never demand word commitments that aren't part of God's plan walking alone without her my path be damned goddess so fly, she makes my anger mad i put anger out for the melody of a sweet note from her mouth as i sit on her couch trying not to rewind our seconds catching her thoughts right after we speak, saving the essence that feels sweet capture them in my hippocampus and replay them next week "she was sweetest thing I've ever known" kiss on my soul-lobe a spiritual requirement this is that next level love i've been trying i rest in God's hands heaven on earth at my command give half my land if it is to be given my birth chart says i am not gender driven but i'll drive to deliver these love notes on her earth labor for her a new birth
she waited years for me to arrive in this moment of recognition...i dedicate these honest lines.
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swayyah

Number of posts: 277 Registration date: 2007-11-05
 | Subject: Re: goddess Wed May 06, 2009 10:29 am | |
| i really wanted to write something deep and prolific as a response but i'm speechless! if i said this poem was amazing i would be lying cuz it's soooooooooooooooo much greater than that. i don't know how many times i gotta tell you but your work definitely needs to be flying off the shelves in somebody's bookstore. |
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