.:Kools in Search of New(Ports) part 2:.

kriticool · Number of posts: 124 Registration date: 2007-03-04

here ::two
where there’s always
always
and in all ways
something offered
something to be said about emotional earthquakes
fiery lakes; the ones that have now quelled
here where the robotics; the natural
have gelled...together

we make no mockery of this...or them
better for one to fathom; to go out spending quality time
calculating the multiple waves
the ways to breathe more easily
more easily as the ever hardening drugs
smash & grab tired minds
minds lucid, not expanding...yet wanting
needing to grasp full laughter
where a cracked & piped in joke
it gets played
all the while owned by filtered tips
leftovers of
kool spirals gone up in smoke

a rancid joke
kool singles looking for new(er) ports
we again land without a plan..nor a net
so the earth cries
gathering together the tough
& crooked smiles
the ignorance in styles; so corny
distorting themselves;
throwing themselves onto a flaming fire
net kings...coals for their own desire
only to return to a steady grimace..

::will colder jokes end this?

lacking promise
each smirk
popping up with the sizzle leaking
red eyes peeping.. perched
along off centered corners of the gloom
this room; its a royal flush
the feeling & the rush
precariously wanting to dance across another table
chips stacked, going down
& unstable; enjoining
another mouth full of auto tuned coon
our hands needing to reach back
but to where
& how soon?

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critter · Subject: Re: .:Kools in Search of New(Ports) part 2:. Thu Oct 15, 2009 9:33 am

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s.t.r.o.n.g. rhythm & natural cat balance make
an architecture of ideas that create a space
for heart ... which is good. anybody can
throw together smart ideas. not just
anybody can understand the
underpinnings & complete
the structure with a plan
in hand ... a plan
to stretch an attention span
into a moment of reflection
and who is that, anyway?
it's a good thing i've basically
gotten over getting jealous
about other people's stuff.
thanks for putting this doggy
in the window. the price tag
is still on it, but you've made
the payment plan amenable.
critter neil.
charlotte, nc.