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the_whisper



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PostSubject: More Now   Mon May 04, 2009 6:57 am

afro

He means more to me now

A few years after the vows

And suffering a few trials

He means more to me now

Than any man I've known in my life span

More than anyone but The Most High God can

Yall don't understand

You can't

Cause he means more

More than sunlight, more than water

Helped to create my daughter

Give me his last quarter

Cause I mean more

To him than money

At my worse he still wants me

Think you gonna take him from me?

Kick rocks honey

Cause this means more

To us than anything we've ever had

Never wanted something to last forever so bad

And it will

Cause for this I'd kill

With no remorse

It's something we don't have to force

We mean more

Than the cars, the timeshare, the house

More than the bank accounts

More than you make me mad I kick you out

Cause this is the man that made me forever young

The man who took the time to learn where my love comes from

Made me dream big

When I had no breath gave me his

I wish you half of our happiness

No our joy cause this is perpetual

A life without him won't do

Cause this is the man

Who held my hand while I cried

After my grandmother died

Even though I refused to talk

The man who suffered through my anger by taking walks

And you've heard my poetry

But see you don't know what's like to live with me

This man is a King

He nurtured my dreams

Speaks his love as fact and

Backs it up with action

The father of my child

The giver of her smile

Break up? Us? Come on now

Cause we've got more to battle for

Than ever before

Our lives depend on this

Built our kingdom around it

We are so into this

We are each other we've become so intimate

And you thought love was all romance

What's described in novels, poems, and songs

Two body's sweating it out all night long

That's all wrong

Half of love is some shit you can't describe in a lifetime

It ain't blind

It's just somethin that most will never find

It's body soul and mind

And pockets lots of times

Cause we spend for our future

We sacrifice for our life

Work day and night

Give and get

Live and let

For something so blessed

That you'd stick your hand in the toilet to rescue and claim it

Yep this is the shit

I said it

And it only tends to increase

Cause the day we exchanged vows?

Well that's now the day we loved each other the least
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april



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PostSubject: Re: More Now   Mon May 04, 2009 9:21 am

this
is
beautiful! cheers cheers cheers

and i love that it is for real and that you put it down to share with the rest of us.

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Tizzy Lizz^



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PostSubject: Re: More Now   Mon May 04, 2009 3:20 pm

Yoooo

Whisper.

Girl, I can't even say anything. Its so beautiful that I don't want to call it beautiful (because its more than beautiful...you know what I mean?)

This is real love.
I'm so thankful to have read it.
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me-cca



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PostSubject: Re: More Now   Mon May 04, 2009 5:45 pm

Quote:
Cause he means more

More than sunlight, more than water

Helped to create my daughter


...this is beautiful Whisper!
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the_whisper



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PostSubject: Re: More Now   Mon May 04, 2009 6:19 pm

afro

Interesting. I read this piece to king when he got up this morning and he loved it. He asked when I thought of this. Funny thing is I never thought of this 'piece'. Just got up and wrote it then posted. I guess it's kindah a reflection on how I feel each time he and I reach a milestone. I always say in kindah of a joking way 'Damnit. Guess I'm stuck with you now.' And he replys 'Damn right.' lol!
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M.A.P.



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PostSubject: Re: More Now   Mon May 04, 2009 6:50 pm

Awesome. This is the type of love I hope to have one day. Thank you.
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glory



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PostSubject: Re: More Now   Tue May 05, 2009 12:43 am

the_whisper wrote:

I always say in kindah of a joking way 'Damnit. Guess I'm stuck with you now.' And he replys 'Damn right.' lol!


Laughing cheers
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