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PostSubject: .:Naseer's Gumbo [The B-Ball Metaphors]:.   Thu Jul 23, 2009 8:06 am



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game day; another game face...another mirror smudged
too blurred, him not giving a damn about reflection
just waiting to save and get saved
it’s the grind in the game; the game in the grind
a playmaker's mind straight through to a happy ending
an upending where he’d be one of the heroes
this time ...like other times the whole game had already stolen the ball
stripped...another bad call
spittin’...nigger who? nigger you..
it’s the ball he believed he’d been having
where his thinking; it goes shameless...kunte’ in kente’...him
still going nameless; setting out to tame this..
toby playin' at kobi; his self mockery looking for its rage
writing it out; the application of ink hits the page
a full court press onto the paper
testing himself; pushing...screaming
then whispering; the messaging of honest perceptions

he’s the playmaker yet he goes untitled..
unrivaled and it's part of the act...it’s a matter of fact
his game is a bit too abstract to see it straight
it’s a square crowd’s fate; perhaps his world is too round
the foul play consistently playing too foul
the vertical...inna horizontal zone
an intuitive vision leading him to react
yet pimp smacked by his own peripheral vision
got him looking back...back from that edge
out on that ledge slightly off course
wherein he gets taken
taken back to that same spot going in circles..
where everyone knows...a 360 minus a 360 equates to zero
so here’s your hero...the jumper
leaps peeps and takes a look; a real hard look
where here in the aftermath
it’s a trapping defense wherein heaven & hell together
both double clutch on the eeriness & suspense
but none of it really close enough to feeling important

he opts for that requisite
that time out to pause; to review the by-laws
then its back to the grind...the game..
that court where his court is marginally on that edge
and he’s again at that line...left to write
again taking another shot
banking off the bored he’ll produce another wilding out
a bailout; his own maybe even yours
or he just might bask et al into that round file
call it...“still working on his follow through; his free flows”
tossin 'em up until the gym is closed
remaining just a few drops
a few drops short of any pertinent inking
just keep the game from sinking and
perhaps his pen would again talk trash
as he half smiles then arcs
lofts the crunched & crinkled pulp; the fiction & fact
the posturing poetics
arcs ‘em; as he just launches
watches the pulp crash & burn...now tell me?
what did we learn? ..g’wan now

::swish:::

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